Batman Vox Humana Issue #2 Page 6 and 7
Page 6 and 7
Location: Outside Robinson Park on the street
Scene: A woman parks her car, opens her umbrella, and gets out. The floronic man is watching from the park. She walking quickly and briskly to her apartment building. She opens the front door and as she is walking in the door of the building the floronic man rushes into her with the same ferocity with which he attacked the derelict. Fight ensues and she does fight, she bites, and punches, and kicks, but the floronic man doesn’t even notice. The floronic man quickly, robotically, and without feeling subdues the woman and rapes her. This scene should be in no way sexy. It should proceed more like a beating than a sexual experience.
The floronic man’s face wrenches, and he finishes. There is blood, cum, piss, and shit on the floor. The woman is curled up, sobbing. The floronic man just stands there. Another gentleman has finally built up the nerve and opens the door into the hallway to see what is going on. The floronic man turns his head and rushes the gentleman and proceeds to beat the him to death.
Batman Vox Humana Issue #2 Page 4 and 5
Page 4 and 5
Scene: Lightning strikes the tree and splits it. The man comes falling out of the tree. The man falls to the ground and is kneeling on the ground, coughing, as if using his lungs for the first time. The bark is falling off of his body, revealing olive toned skin.
Scene: Close up of his face, it is smooth and contains hints of a grain. His eyes seems to be searching and his nose is sniffing the air. His mouth is open and seems to be tasting the world.
Location: Further into Robinson Park
Scene: An old, derelict man is hiding from the rain. He has found a clearing in which a lean-to has been put together. He has a trashcan fire going and is just sitting. The derelict is wearing round rim glasses and a long coat. The floronic man bursts through the trees and bushes and just beats the living hell out of the derelict until he breathes no more. During this episode, the floronic man wears an expression during this time as if he is screaming but he makes no noise at all. The only sound is of flesh being broken and meat being torn.
Scene: The derelict is dead and the floronic man puts on the overcoat. Then he puts on the glasses. For some reason, the glasses now reflect a light, grayish-green color and are opaque for the rest of the comic.(There is no explanation for the change in the glasses color. I just wanted the floronic man to look this way. The clothes are just an acknowledgment of his once human history.)
Batman Vox Humana Issue #2 Page 3
Page 3
Location: Robinson Park
Scene: Horizontal Black Panel
Next 3 panels should be right next to each other in one line.
Scene: Panel 1; Tree with the shape of a man twisted into its bark. It should not be obvious, but should hint at the shape of a man, though the face should be more apparent than the body. The face resembles John Glover.
Scene: Panel 2; Close up of the eyes. They are closed and covered in bark.
Scene: Panel 3; Close up of the eyes. They are open now and looking skyward. The eyes are shades of green and brown.
Scene: Horizontal Black Panel
Batman Vox Humana Issue #2 Page 2
Page 2
Scene: Horizontal Black Panel
Horizontal Panel
Location: Gotham
Scene: Gotham skyline is lit up by lightning and it is raining.
Scene: Horizontal Black Panel
Location:Robinson Park
Scene: Overhead 3/4, skewed 10 degrees view of sign in the arch of the gate leading into Robinson Park
